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A
STUDY ON THE DETECTIVE STORY
I.
INTRODUCTION
"Agatha Christie is the most
widely
published writer of any time and in any language. Only the Bible and
the plays
of Shakespeare have sold more edition than the murder mysteries".
One could ask, after reading the
fragment
quoted, a simple question: "Why?" and we believe that the answer to
this question would make an eloquent introduction to the present paper.
The XX-th century is coming to
an end.
Literature worldwide has experienced all kinds of narrative structures(
if we
are to refer only to prose) along the time , from the total omniscience
to what
was called "the death of the author". There are literary works which
are not accessible to every one. It is here a question of taste and
also of
culture. But the detective fiction has gained so wide an audience to
read and
most of all it is entertaining.
Such texts are a challenge for
the reader
who involves mentally in the solving of the mysteries.
It is therefore a chance to put
your mind
to work in a very pleasant way and it is also everybody's taste of
adventure
which finds here the atmosphere needed. Thus detective fiction becomes
a refuge
in the every day's agitation and worries, a place full of danger but
which is
safer than any other place in the real world. People have the
possibility to
test their abilities of reasoning, of anticipating, inferring, and
drawing
conclusions in spite of the fact that they have at their disposal very
little
material.
So, taking as key concepts some
ideas:
"adventure", "challenge", "reasoning",
"meeting danger from the safe position of the reader", "being
finally morally rewarded by the punishment of the evil", we can
understand
why the detective fiction has so much success since its first
apparition till
nowadays.
A very important thing when
speaking about
detective fiction is the fact that, in the end, the guilty person(s)
is(are)
discovered and the good always wins upon the evil.
We should not forget the fact
that,
although it first appeared in the XIX-th century, detective fiction
flourished
after the two world wars, perhaps because then people felt the need to
revenge
the numerous crimes which had been committed against humanity. The
satisfaction
of seeing a murderer punished - even if it was only in a book - was
after all
soothing for so many frighten and terrified souls.
II.
INFO DATA ON DETECTIVE FICTION
·
Definition
·
Pattern
·
General types of detective
fiction
"Detective story is a work of fiction about
a puzzling crime, a number of clues, and a detective who eventually
solves the
mystery. In most detective stories, the crime is murder and the clues
lead to
or away from the solution "("Book of the world").
The pattern of most detective
stories is
the same, whether the tale is a novel, a
novelette or a short story. The author presents the crime, the
detective and
several clues and suspects. The climax of the story comes when the
detective
reveals the criminal and tells how the mystery was solved.
Certain conventions have
developed from the
detective story pattern. The author is expected to "play fair" with
the reader. That is, the reader should be given exactly the same
information
that the detective uses to find the criminal. Readers can treat the
story as a
battle of wits between themselves and the detective .
The detective in most of these
stories is
not a professional police officer, but a private consultant. For
example,
G.K.Chesterton's Father Brown is a priest, Rex Shout's Nero Wolfe is a
gourmet
and an intellectual. Fictional professional detectives include Wilkie
Collin's
Sergent Cuff, John Creasey's Inspector Maigret. Romance or financial
gain may
be a factor in a detective story, but the main theme is the mystery and
its
solution.
Some of
these characteristics and some others will be discussed while
analysing
Agatha Christie's The Adventure of the
Egyptian Tomb (in chapter III).
The detective story above
mentioned belongs
to the well known "Whodunnit" which is one of the 4 types of
detective fiction, together with "the hard boiled detective
narrative", "the police procedural", "the metaphysical
detective narrative".
Whodunnit, the British detective
fiction is
usually a detective puzzle that presents crime exclusively as a riddle
to be
solved through the "Wh-" train of questions (i.e. Who, Why, How, Where,
When).
The term Whodunnit (Who
done it ?) was coined by D.Jordan in the American
News of Books in 1930. It refers to a form of writing invented by Edgar
Allan
Poe in "The Murder of Rue Morgue" (1841).
The mystery is very important,
emphasized
whereas the writer must follow a set of guidelines that require fair
play in
the telling of the murder, presentation of the clues and the
withholding of the
identity of the murderer until the end.
The art of the "whodunnit" comes
in the pursuit of the murderer through the skillful presentation of
clues. The
writer is expected to adhere to the standard of fair play. Which is,
the writer
must present to the reader all the clues
necessary to reveal the significance of the clues. The writer can
misdirect the
reader by emphasizing the unimportant clues.
Margery Allingham, the mystery
writer went
on to single out an smaller group of essentials for a murder mystery
belonging
to the "Whodunnit" type in the preface of "The Mysterious Mr.
Campion" (1963): a killing, "a mystery, an inquiry, and a conclusion
with an element of satisfaction".
The writing of a classic
whodunnit is
governed by some very strict rules concerning the order of the
sequences in the
text: starting from a certain problem, it goes back in time, finds its
roots
and deals with them; then the solution of the problem is given and the
guilty
persons are punished.
Now let's follow these stages in
one of
Agatha Christie's stories, taking not only its title, but also its
reading as
an adventure of the mind.
III.
Agatha Christie's:
"The
Adventure of the Egyption Tomb"
·
Short
presentation of the plot
·
Why a
Whodunnit?
·
Narrative technique
·
Title
and Plot
·
Time
and Setting
·
Character Building
·
Language
and Irony
·
Short presentation of the plot
Reading a detective story
becomes an
adventure in itself, adventure which people search for, when stepping
into its
narrative structure, the plot included.
The
title of
the story which we are going to discuss announces "The Adventure of the
Egyptian Tomb". The title, we must admit is quite interesting and
arouses
the reader's interest.
In
a nutshell,
the story is about the investigation of three deaths which "followed
upon
the discovery and opening of the Tomb of King Men-her-Ra. The series of
deaths
is presented by Hastings very
succintly: two
archaeologists: Sir John Willard and Mr. Bleibner, excavating not far
from Cairo,
came unexpectedly
on a series of funeral chambers. Soon after, Sir John Willard died
"quite
suddenly" of heart failure. The newspaper took the opportunity of
reviving
the old superstitions connected with the ill luck of certain Egyptian
treasures. A fortnight later, Mr. Bleibner died of acute blood
poisoning and a
few days after, a nephew of his shot himself in New York.
At this stage of the story, Inspector Poirot's
help is asked by Lady Willard whose son, Guy Willard went to Egypt
to
continue his late father's work. He gathers all the information he can
get from
Lady Willard, he informs himself about "the other members of the
party" (which are: Dr. Tosswill, Mr. Schneider of the Metropolitan
Museum,
Mr. Harper- a young American secretary, Dr. Ames and Hassan- Sir
Willard's
servant). After that he decides to go to Egypt. A
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week later, Poirot and Hastings
arrive
there, just in time to learn about another death: that of Mr.
Schneider. The
cause of his death: tetanus.
Poirot meets Sir Guy, then Dr.
Ames whom he
asks about the last death and its cause. Dr. Ames assures him that the
death
was due to tetanus. Poirot gives everybody the impression that he
really
believes in the Egyptian King's curse. Then he talks to Mr. Harper who
wants to
return to New York,
being terrified of the latest events. He speaks to Hassan also and then
to Dr.
Tosswill.
A strange shadow is seen moving
amidst the
tents, which makes Poirot appealing to magic: he draws in the sand all
kinds of
diagrams around his tent, in order, he says to be protected. He asks
then for a
cup of tea which is brought by Hassan. After these, Hastings finds Poirot "lying back
across
the couch, his face horribly convulsed". He calls Dr. Ames and tells
him
that Poirot is dying, after having drunk the tea. But, it all proves to
be a
bluffing.
Poirot
hasn't drunk the tea, but he mentions
that he has put it in a safe place to give it to analyses. It is the
moment in
which Dr. Ames commits suicide by poisoning and thus the guilty man is
discovered and punished. "His hand went to his mouth, a smell of bitter
almonds filled the air, and he swayed forward and fell.
The final fragment of the story
brings light
on this case with Poirot's explanations: Dr. Ames took advantage of Sir
John
Willard's death and of the superstitious panic provoked and decided to
kill Mr.
Bleibner to take his fortune. Young Bleibner who committed suicide had
left a
note in which he said: "I am a leper" (Poirot asked for the
information from New York).
He killed himself because, as Dr. Ames had assured him, he really
believed he
had leper. Mr. Schneider's death is not very clear. Dr. Ames may have
killed
him because he suspected something or in order to enhance the rumors
about the
Egyptian curse.
Yet, the ending says that the
case was
hushed up and that "people still believe in the vengeance of a bygone
king".
This is the story. What makes it
a Whodunnit ?
The present story follows the
strict rules
of a classic whodunnit. The chronological order is reversed. It starts
from a
certain problem, in this case, the three deaths that have already
occurred by
the time the story begins.
The presentation of the case is
made by
Captain Hastings, here, a first person narrator. Then, the detective is
called
by one character who is related to one of the dead persons: Lady
Willard. She
is afraid for her son's life and asks for Poirot's help. The detective
questions her and then goes to Egypt,
trying to find the roots of the problem. His inquiries go back in time
in his
search for elucidating clues. He speaks to every person of the
"party" and he even misleads the other characters (Hastings included) and also the
reader,
because he gives the impression that he really believes in the curse.
So,
together with the right clues, which the author gives, playing fair
with the
reader, the latter gets some false clues (or better said s/he misreads
the
clues s/he gets) in order to enhance the mystery.
Hastings plays in the text the role of
the mislead
reader and voices the readers' amazement:
<<"Dr.
Ames ?" I cried,
stupefied. "But I thought you believed in some occult influence?".
"You misunderstood me, Hastings.
What
I meant was that I believed in the terrific force of superstition. Once
get it
firmly established that a series of deaths are supernatural and you
might
almost stab a man in broad daylight, and it would still be put down to
the
curse, so strongly is the instinct of the supernatural implanted in the
human
race.
Mystery is the most important
element of a
whodunnit and it is present here, being doubled by the exotic setting
and its
aura of superstitions.
The story becomes a battle of
wits between
the reader and the detective. In the end the reader is reassured of the validity of human logic in the face of
strange mysteries. The text is also rewarding, enhancing the reader's
trust in
the moral values. When the murderer commits suicide Poirot makes an
eloquent affirmation
in this sense:
<<"Another victim", said Poirot gravely. "But the last.
Perhaps it is the best way. He has three deaths on his head.">>
So having all these elements
applied to
this story, we can certainly say that it is a whodunnit.
The
narrative
technique of the story built in the general atmosphere of a whodunnit
enlightens some very interesting aspects
of the detective fiction.
Looking
again
at the text, this time from a narrative perspective, the title is the
first
which draws our attention.
Many
of the
titles of Agatha Christie's stories begin with "the adventure" or
"the mystery" which reinforces the idea that in a whodunnit the
mystery is one (perhaps the most important one of the Key elements. We
may give
some examples : "The Adventure of the Cheap Flat", "The Mystery
of the Blue Jar", "The Mystery of the Blue Train", "The
Adventure of the Egyptian Tomb".
So,
the title
is the first step the reader makes in the mystery of the story.
The
very first
phrase, a threshold phrase is also very important. It creates
attention, a horizon
of expectation making the readers curious, inviting them to take part
in the
adventures.
"I
have
always considered that one the most thrilling and dramatic of the many
adventures I have shared with Poirot was that of the investigation into
the
strange series of deaths […]".
As
usually in
a whodunnit, the plot is the linear one, there is only one narrative
plan, although the setting of the story
moves from London to the pyramids of Egypt.
Speaking
of
setting, it plays a very important function in the narrative structure
of this
story.
Being
a very
exotic place, Egypt
not only does enhance the mystery, but its aura of superstitions is
used to
misdirect the readers.
The
change of
setting (moving from England
to Egypt)
is also very important because it brings a different perspective on the
detective. But, we'll come back to this idea when speaking of
characters.
Usually,
in an
Agatha Christie story, time is very precisely noted, minute by minute
because
it is often used an alibi. In this story, the author places doubt on
the idea
of murder itself. The narrative doesn't present crimes, but "a series
of
deaths" and nobody needs any alibi. Therefore, time is noted only to
help
the reader understand the order of the events : "soon ", "a
fortnight later" and "a few days afterwards", "it was a
week later". So, the notation of time (or the lack of precise
notation),
also emphasizes the mystery, misleading the reader used to find in time
an
important clue.
In
this story,
time doesn't have the role of a clue which makes the riddle more
difficult.
But
inspector
Poirot seems to cope very well with this situation and the reader
follows his
examples. Usually, the detective in a mystery story is ranking
immediately
below the author, after him coming the other characters and the reader,
in what
concerns the authority in solving the case. As the author is hidden in
the text
(and we'll come back to this), the detective becomes both a rival and a
model
for the reader.
Usually,
and
it is also the case here, the story presents flat characters, lacking
psychological depth.
Nothing seems to affect the
detective, who
can see more than others can, arousing thus readers' admiration and
even envy.
But, as a person, he is not at all untouchable. In her Autobiography,
Agatha Christie said that "it is very important
that a detective should be an ordinary man. He should prove that
everybody (not
only the exceptional ones) can solve a mystery". Poirot, a retired
Belgian
police officer, having a high opinion of himself, doesn't feel at ease
travelling by ship: <<Then he groaned. "But, oh" he lamented,
"The sea! The hateful sea!">>. Other structures in the text,
such as: "Poirot, the picture of misery, wilted by my side", prove
that the famous detective is after all just human. And this makes us,
the
readers, feel good, doesn't it? This is, we believe, what the author
wants.
Concerning the language, it
shares the
privilege of having Poirot, a retired Belgian officer who, very often
uses
French or just the syntax of French. This makes reading pleasant and it
contributes to the humor of the text , entertaining the readers. The
lamentations of Poirot is hilarious: <<"And my boots", he
wailed: "Regard them Hastings.
My boots, of the neat patent leather, usually so smart and shining.
See, the sand
is inside them, which is painful and outside them, which outrages the
eyesight.
And also the heat, it causes my mustaches to become limp - but
limp!">>.
In this story the relation
established
between text, author and narrator is very interesting.
Although assuming the function
of an
omniscient writer, the author doesn't appear in the text. The author is
completely hidden. We have yet a first narrator. The text features a
speaker in
the person of Hastings.
But the narrator knows very
little. He is
just a shadow following the detective. Just as we, readers, try to
understand
the latter's moves.
Hastings plays in the text the role of
the reader
who doesn't understand at thing (if there is someone like that).
In the end, when the case is
solved, it is
not the author who explains to the reader the use of the clues, but
Poirot
talking to a wondering Hastings.
That's why we could say that detective fiction really cares for the
readers'
feelings, trying not to make them fell insignificant.
IV.
Final Word
Agatha Christie proves in her Autobiography that she doesn't consider
the detective fiction as belonging to low literature. The most
important and
valuable thing is, she says, the capacity of reasoning and solving
puzzles, by
putting clues together in a logical manner. She considers that the
originality
of the detective story doesn't stand in the fact the guilty person is
punished,
but in the way in which the writer arranges the events and builds the
narrative
structure.
Readers tend to agree with these
ideas and
expect more and more riddles to solve in a detective story. They read,
taste
the adventure and then come back in the real life, somewhat different
than they
were before.
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